Puppet

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    Puppet

    Rhymes and times, like a working clock never sets my empty
    soul at ease, for once i would love to feel happiness's fresh breeze.
    Instead of constant fog pounding through my head,
    how could you look me in the eye and hold you'r filthy head high.
    I guess I will never know why i was a puppet in you'r show,
    Please, I beg of you just cut my strings free, I am dying here can't you see. Twisted strings all the same I will no longer be part of you'r shame.

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    Artie commented on Puppet

    11-21-2009

    Very clever write - I think this would fit in all forms of control from emotional to physical. This kinda fits one of mine - Souless Solace. 10 from me

    gypsyf8 commented on Puppet

    06-21-2009

    beautiful -- and sad. . . . i can relate to being a puppet and needing the twisted string cut . . .i have added it to my favorites . . .thank you for a great read!!!

    AZsbiggestfan commented on Puppet

    02-19-2009

    awww baby i know the emotion is real and i feel it when you write these. as i always say you touch me with all that you write never stop

    bforibus commented on Puppet

    02-18-2009

    and I'm a real boy! is what jumps in my mind when i read this. very good visual and flow. loved it. gave it a 10

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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