Dark to Light
Out of the Dark
And into the Light
That opened a new spark
That would soon be burning bright
And into the Light
That opened a new spark
That would soon be burning bright
Dark to Light
1 Comments
Tags: Emotional
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Blueroad commented on Dark to Light
05-04-2010
- It's a beautiful and effective poem, a pictorial one. But, I think deleting the last line gives the poem more influence. It ends in its climax in this way. You will have to change the style of the poem perhaps to new verse then, of course.
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