Day Dreaming

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    Day Dreaming

    Day dreaming of you.
    Who are you?
    I see you everywhere,
    and i don't know what to do.
    When i day dream,
    I talk to you.
    But when i don't
    The talking is hard to do.
    You are so amazing,
    and I'm into you.
    There are things i want to say,
    But they can't get through
    I see you everywhere.
    I'm day dreaming of you.

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    Swann commented on Day Dreaming

    06-14-2009

    I like the feel of this poem, and it easily relatable. I have felt this way before about a girl. Really good job capturing being loss in thought about someone.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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