Death is...

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    Death is...

    Death is when your loved ones must part.
    Death is a sharp pain to the heart.
    Death is a feeling of permanent sadness and pain.
    Death is when your loved ones have forever gone away.
    Death is a call to heaven or hell.
    Dath is an eternal mansion or cell.
    Death is a lesson to learn about.
    Death is a loss, without a doubt.
    Death is an unhappy feeling to have.
    Death is unpleasant on anyone's behalf.
    Death is something we all will go through.
    Death is a storm waiting to brew.
    Death is a lingering crow always overhead.
    Death is a soul, done being fed...

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    starfox115 commented on Death is...

    01-27-2010

    great 14 liner. Only one thing, i hate how it ends. Remember in poetry your poems must have a conclusion just like a story. this poem ends without a conclusion. other that that, its a great poem. ill give you an 8

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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