Death

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    Death

    Lying there breathless
    No movement,
    Silence
    Wires hooked to machines
    No movement,
    Silence
    I touched his hand
    No movement,
    Silence
    I hear a loud buzz
    Doctors rush in
    Everyone is screaming
    I see th sheet being pulled over his body
    No movement,
    Silence
    The doctors walk me to my car
    Where i sit
    No movement,
    Silence...

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    Merrilyn commented on Death

    03-25-2009

    Oh sweetheart i wish there was something i could say to you that mattered, the only thing i can say is your stronger than i would be able to be i LOVE your writing very strong and deep i give you a 10 for sure

    alejapoet commented on Death

    03-05-2009

    This is such a reality my friend and you will realize that people can't handle the truth. We all must die someday and we all will face pain-trials and tribulations. Keep writing what is real and true, Love it! I believe and admire poems from the heart and of where we have been and where we are going now from all the pain-lies and disappointments. We survive-We live and we are strong. Author Aleja Bennett http://alejabennett.net84.net http://myspace.com/authoralejabennett

    Drivingczar commented on Death

    02-27-2009

    I feel your hurt and pain deeply.

    chadallac74 commented on Death

    02-26-2009

    I don't know who left you a "1", but I left you a "10." Nice work... the ending left me in shock.

    crisanta commented on Death

    02-22-2009

    hi,ur poem is deep. it makes u think. i liked it.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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