Hurts Door

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  • Sadness

    Hurts Door
    This hurt has taken over me,
    My heart isn't the way it use to be.
    Shadows lurking through my mind,
    I'm trapped in the darkness of time.
    Memories of how it used to be,
    Vanish along with what's left of me.
    I'm not myself anymore,
    I've closed and locked my soul's door...

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    WordSlinger commented on Hurts Door

    03-09-2009

    This poem is lurking through my mind,
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    alejapoet commented on Hurts Door

    03-05-2009

    I believe and admire poems from the heart and of where we have been and where we are going now from all the pain-lies and disappointments. We survive-We live and we are strong. Author Aleja Bennett http://alejabennett.net84.net http://myspace.com/authoralejabennett
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    chadallac74 commented on Hurts Door

    02-28-2009

    Way to let it out... if this is your own experience... you will find it. Nice write.
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    Drivingczar commented on Hurts Door

    02-27-2009

    I'm confident you'll survive. When i think of what i've survived i'm always certain other people will survive their hurts and pains and become even stronger.
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    beverly commented on Hurts Door

    02-22-2009

    This too shall pass.
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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