Dec. 10th

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    dedicated to my future husband...dont lose faith my love...

    Dec. 10th

    Dec 10th


    this is the first day you wrote to me...
    oh what a glorious date...
    its funny how God moves things
    so we may find our perfect mate...
    i lingered in solitude, sheer somberness
    and sadness...
    i was beggin to find warmth once again...
    and where there once was a black hole,
    an abyss
    now overflows with love and passion!!!
    im still alone...
    and still in solitude...
    oh but not so somber!!!
    for i feel alive ...
    full of vibes...
    and soarin thruough
    the skies...!!!
    for i found the love i want
    and all i need to do is wait...
    wait for the day for the solitude
    to end...
    and embrace the greatness that
    is bound to begin!!!!

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    heyneil commented on Dec. 10th

    12-14-2009

    I really enjoyed this poem. I knew what you meant without reading your commentary. So to the point with the beauty that is real. So if you're not feeling that way, and you made it up, or made it up for someone else, I'm impressed! Plus, it's a cobwebbed corner being cleaned out, so there is human hope, and inspiration. That what it gives to the rest of us. Fluffy words are empty. Beautifully written ideas are null. Somehow, your experience lends itself hope to others, and is empowered by the reality that you are still waiting/and or were always waiting hopelessly, so you're back on track and that's very Human! Jesus' Footprints :) Love is great! Neil
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    leeat2810

    12/15/2009

    thank you! i soo greatly appreciate you for your kind words...god bless.. laura

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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