Deep Ocean

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    Deep Ocean

    Swimming out in the open seas feeling like noone around .
    Crying out for help and noone hearing your calls .
    Swimming with the Sharks and loosing your mind out in the
    deep dark ocean .
    Feeling like your drowning and about to take your last breathe .
    Like a captin loosing his ship , spiraling down fast , your dreams
    seems like their fading away .
    Trying to see the light in the deep ocean .

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    mla commented on Deep Ocean

    02-13-2011

    A captain losing his ship would feel like drowning. Now that I think about this that is a good analogy. Thank you. Swimming with the sharks is a good analogy for being a woman - is it not? A woman in business, or life.

    pumbaa commented on Deep Ocean

    03-19-2009

    I like this one alot

    YvonneMarieD32

    07/06/2009

    ty it took me 2 days it about my youngest brother he havent been his self sent are mom past away

    mla commented on Deep Ocean

    03-06-2009

    Your poem was very upbeat. How did you do that?

    YvonneMarieD32

    07/06/2009

    i wrote it then my boyfriend put a few words more in it ty

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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