Depression

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    Depression
    Depression
    Many people feel this
    horrible emptiness
    This feeling that no one cares;
    that life is just passing by.
    Days, then months go by
    Where is their life;
    they sleep all the time.
    Procastination leads to bigger problems,
    then chaos starts.
    A DownWard Spiral, Going faster & faster
    Hard to stop & react.
    Need to find their inner strength, their faith & take a Stand!

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    countrypoet commented on Depression

    03-23-2009

    When someone feels like this if they can find a compassionate soul to confide in it helps to ease some of those dark feelings.This is a well written poem about a difficult subject.Keep up the good work.
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    countrypoet commented on Depression

    02-10-2009

    Another great poem.I especially like the last stanza about people needing to find their inner strength,their faith and taking a stand.I definitely agree.
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    rollerderby commented on Depression

    01-21-2009

    Depreesion hits us all atone time or another in life. I know, I've had my bouts with it myself. But found that writing and listening to my own heart can help. I know it seems like no one cares at times, but you can't give up. Because who knows, that
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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