Designed
CurlsAnd Ringlets
Cinnamon Spirals
Hair of a goddess
Skin like cream
Dreams of a scene
Where your eyes
Twinkled green
Fragmented emeralds
Designed for me...
Designed
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Poem Commentary
another very detailed oneAnd Ringlets
Cinnamon Spirals
Hair of a goddess
Skin like cream
Dreams of a scene
Where your eyes
Twinkled green
Fragmented emeralds
Designed for me...
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Azzrella commented on Designed
03-26-2013
- To the point, some ppl think poems need to be long winded, I disagree.I love it, you've got my Irish coloring down pat! lol!!
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am2anangel commented on Designed
10-21-2012
- short, simple,detailed, and to the point. would have to agree with diffuse it's missing something. Maybe more passion and personalization. Share your story with us. broaden your details. great concept just needs to be explored further. well done. -Tonya
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10-21-2012
- yes, its really nice, the description.. but you know, I think you are missing something, because I cant feel the emotion that the description is supposed to inspire. This poem seems to be incomplete.
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