Fragile lifetime

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    Read and let your mind enjoy playing with words

    Fragile lifetime

     Colors spin
    Drops and drips
    Circles with tips
    Frayed edges
    Grey ledges
    Small wedges
    Blue shaes
    White rays
    A sunlit haze
    Orange blades
    Slice the skies
    A secret surprise
    Hides behind
    This FRAGILE LIFETIME.... 

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    Kingwebstar commented on Fragile lifetime

    10-20-2012

    I would have named this the colors of our lives. Great job though.I am glad to see you here. Love Da KinG
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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