despair

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    despair

    I feel an emptyness
    in the bottom of my soul
    and no matter what I try
    I cannot escape the hole.

    I know that it is my sorrow
    my self pity and pain
    that push me deeper
    into an endless scorching rain

    I can find no sunshine
    nor is there any light
    and no matter how hard I strive
    I seem to always lose this fight

    I want to feel the sun
    warming my face again
    but I fear that my empty heart
    knows this to be in vain

    Life can be such a cruel thing
    bringing such empytness and dark
    I just want to rest forever
    knowing that I will never leave a mark

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    NayInLove commented on despair

    01-28-2009

    wow i could feel everything you were saying! great job

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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