Do You Still Think of Me?

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And the ghosts dance on in our absence...everything changes, but it all stays the same...but Honey I got to tell you...I cant stand the rain!!!

Do You Still Think of Me?

In the cool of the evening do you still think of me?
Do you have to stop and write and clear your brain so you won't think
of the sweet smell of patchouli and the scent of us...,
and the taste and the warmth, the hungry sweat,after we've made love.

Do you still have dreams about us like you used to do,
and complained of them not stopping after we were through?
Does excitement haunt you still and wake you up...
feeling anxious to complete the our heat while making love.
                                                                                                        I know I miss the smoky warmth and taste of salty skin...
and feeling so connected to you...my best  friend...
does it haunt you...Do you miss me...being known so well?
Does it hurt to know you're loved and that you are not here?

I remember your dream of the pinnacles...we talked on a hill
lovemaking not required for you to draw me near...
Inside your heart...inside your mind...you know I felt the same...
and I remember in your dream there was a gentle rain.

Well, theres a hard rain falling now and its piercing me,
silence is the enemy...but I guess at least I'm free...
but it's like your stole my air...Oh baby, I can't breathe...
Do you expect me to believe that you are really free of me??? 

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Ming commented on Do You Still Think of Me?

01-17-2011

Luv, I don't even know you, and I'm thinking of you. This is an awesome poem on so many levels. Much Peace -Ming

kdarcy commented on Do You Still Think of Me?

07-08-2010

Many things are sooo timeless, do you still ... , what if ... , I wish ... You were talking out loud with this write, I heard it clearly and enjoyed it anyway. An excellent write, you are not alone, be well, k

Contagious commented on Do You Still Think of Me?

06-21-2010

Amazing... great write, good job!!! Hopefully putting your pen to paper helped you cope...

cherylchaney56

06/21/2010

it does... and thanks for your comments.

MindNumbing commented on Do You Still Think of Me?

06-21-2010

The pain and longing that are woven within this piece are beautifully apparent, Cheryl. Very strong imagery and very nicely written... thanks for sharing!

cherylchaney56

06/21/2010

Thank you...was and still is a hard time.

Rhymer commented on Do You Still Think of Me?

06-21-2010

Nice write I know I will be having dreams tonight, can't imagine they would want to be free of you.

cherylchaney56

06/21/2010

Its hard to know what they want. they are complicated...thanks.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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