dont give up!

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dont give up!

DON’T GIVE UP!!


Don’t give up! No matter how hard it seems
Things will get better, and every thing in between.


Everyday is a struggle! This we all know.
But we don’t give up! That’s how we grow!


We live, we learn, we make mistakes.
That’s life! But it can be a stomach ache.

And what that means is life’s not easy!
But it’s funny in a way, sometimes 3-d.

I’ve been through a lot, in my 27 years.
Im still standing, still strong, even with the tears.

But this poem is in no way about me,
Just writing it for one reason, HE told me!

Don’t give up! No matter what the problem is.
There’s always tomorrow, we all know this!

So look at everyday as a piece of luck,
But whatever you do, don’t give up!!!

By: Taji Shelton

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ladyd37 commented on dont give up!

04-17-2009

i tried to give dis poem a 10 it's rite on time!! especially with da trials & tribulations dat i'm facing rite now thanx concience!!

NayInLove commented on dont give up!

02-09-2009

lovely message!

Plot121 commented on dont give up!

02-08-2009

A very insightful poem I think you used too much buts in the piece still it was an inspirational read good work. Robert...

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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