Don't Take Her Please

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    I Have Never Been Blessed With Children,Just Want You All To Know This.But I Do Get Tears Each Time I Read This For The Man That Has Had To Deal With This Hurt n pain

    Don't Take Her Please

     The day my daughter turned seven,
    A day I will always remember.
    when she died and went to Heaven,
    It happened 3 years ago December.
    Walking home from school,
    as she did everyday.
    One to many drinks,
    And he was on his way.
    Up on the curb,
    his car did drive.
    The police brought me there,
    for she was barely alive.
    She looked up at me,
    with a tear in her eye.
    And said please dont cry daddy,
    then she said "Good Bye".
    My heart filled with sorrow,
    as I fell to my knees.
    God dont take my daughter,
    Dont take her please.
    Today my daughter,
    Would have been eleven.
    If she was down here with me,
    And not with God in Heaven.
    This poem is in Dedication to all of the
    Parents,that have lost chilren because of a Drunk
    Driver.May The Lord Bless your life.
    Written By My Fathers Side...3/3/01
    Sincerely your friend Michael

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    orangepony commented on Don't Take Her Please

    08-05-2009

    i feel as the other do,the loss of your own blood is such a shame, are we ever going to learn from this?acholol should not be taken for granted, that will not solve the person problem,but have respect for it,knowing when and when not to drink,can't we make that dicission before a live of a another is gone before our eyes
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    anneliseh commented on Don't Take Her Please

    06-25-2009

    this is a very thoughtful poem. i have never had this happen to someone i knew, but it must be hard over coming something that horrific.
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    ladynight commented on Don't Take Her Please

    06-25-2009

    that was a very heartfelt poem. i have children and i couldn't even imagine the pain of losing one of them. it would destroy me. i feel fo everyone this has ever happened to. no can truly understand the pain they feel.
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    Lucho commented on Don't Take Her Please

    06-25-2009

    Wow! Very touching. I can't imagine what it must be like to have lost your dausghter. I am so sorry for your loss.
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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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