dragonflies

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  • Lost Love

    dragonflies

    Like dragonflies on the breeze,
    the sound of the wind in the trees,
    love that is lost and can't be found,
    a heart that lies broken on the ground.

    like the face of yours that is not around
    just like the love that cannot be found,
    I look around and you're not there
    just like the clothes you used to wear.


    This heart of mine,broken and blue
    just like the song of love so true.

    So I muster the strength to say goodbye,
    just like the wings of an eagle,fly

    Love that is lost still can never die
    I look around and wonder why?

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    ListninEar commented on dragonflies

    10-12-2009

    I like it, sweet and very touching. Did you mean to have the spaces between some of the verses?

    smoothdame commented on dragonflies

    09-14-2009

    great poem I love the way it rhymes and the fact that it talks about love being unable to die even if it is lost. I really believe that this is true. good job.

    hightower92277

    09/14/2009

    thanks so much for commenting on all 3 of my poems.Im happy you liked them all! just like everyone else's,they come from my heart and where my life is at right now. again thanks!

    CasimirJash commented on dragonflies

    09-14-2009

    great poem, I love the rhyme very perfect, and well written, you're right love that is lost will never die, because those are memories.

    hightower92277

    09/14/2009

    thanks for commenting on my poem, Im glad you liked it!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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