now you're gone

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    now you're gone

    I miss you so much,
    I can't stand the pain,
    I wish it would rain
    rain down on me and
    wash away the doubt
    and make me ok again
    I still need to call you my friend

    The promises we made to eachother
    were they all for nothing?
    I thought that was what mace us strong
    now i'm crying because I guess I was wrong.

    A bond like ours is hard to find,
    just like true love, it's one of a kind
    even though things have changed
    in time,maybe we can come back around?
    A different way and yet the same
    Our love is strong enough to play the game.

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    ListninEar commented on now you're gone

    10-12-2009

    Interesting poem. Me reading it today of all days is kinda interesting. Me and my boyfriend of two years broke up a month ago and I asked him to come over tonight. It might not be the same, but it just made me think!

    smoothdame commented on now you're gone

    09-14-2009

    Great poem I really like the part about in time you can come back around different yet the same. I believe that also and I understand where you are comming from with this poem.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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