DREAM$

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    DREAM$



    DREAMS COME TRUE ARE MEANT ONLY FOR FAIRYTALE

    THEY ARE MAKE BELIEVE THOUGHTS OF WHAT WE REALLY WANT

    THEY DON'T COME TRUE FOR ME

    I HAD A DREAM ONCE

    IT WAS ABOUT A GIRL WHO THOUGHT SHE HAD FOUND HER ONE & ONLY

    SHE THOUGHT SHE COULD TOUCH THE STARS

    SHE WOULD LEAP FOR THE MOON IF HE ASKED HER TO

    SHE LOVED HIM MORE THEN LIFE ITS SELF

    EVENTHOUGH SHE DOUBTED ALL THE SWEET NOTHINGS HE WOULD WHISPER IN HER EAR AT NIGHT

    SHE CAME TO BELIEVE THOSE WHISPERS THAT WERE SAID BEHIND CLOSED DOORS AT NIGHT WOULD COME TRUE ONE DAY

    AT ONE TIME SHE KNEW HE LOVED HER BUT HIS LOVE FOR HER WAS NOT STRONG ENOUGH TO HANDLE THE OBSTACLES THEY FACED

    SHE NOTICED THE SMILES THAT WOULD MELT HER HEART AWAY QUIT COMING

    THE KISSES AND SOOTHING TOUCHES HAD STOPPED ALL AT ONCE

    AND MOST OF ALL THE ONE THING THAT MEANT THE MOST TO HER WAS "I LOVE YOU" IT QUIT COMING FROM HIS LIPS

    INSTEAD NOTHING BUT CUSSING & SWEARING CAME FROM THEM BOTH

    ANGER AND FRUSTRATION BLINDED THEM FROM KEEPING

    THIER EYES ON THE PRIZE

    THE DREAMS OF MARRIAGE & CHILDEREN WERENT IN SIGHT ANYMORE

    IT WAS A WAR ZONE

    SHE WANTED THE MAN THAT SHE FELL IN LOVE WITH BACK

    SHE WISHED FOR THE KISSES THAT WOULD MAKE HER FORGET ABOUT ALL THE PAIN AND SUFFERING THE WORLD GAVE HER

    THE SMILES THAT WOULD MELT HER HEART AWAY TOO

    SHE MISSED HIS THOUGHTS, HIS PROMISES, HIS SMELL, HIS TOUCH, & MOSLTY HIS LOVE

    SHE PASSED AWAY OF A BROKEN HEART BECAUSE SHE WAS FORCED TO WALK THE EARTH WITHOUT HER HEART

    SHE HAD GIVEN HIM HER HEART A LONG TIME AGO

    SHE HOPED THAT HE WOULD ONE DAY RETURN WITH ALL THE LOVE SHE HAD GIVEN HIM AND BE HER TRUE ONE & ONLY

    BUT INSTEAD HE IGNORED THE ONE PERSON WHO LOVED HIM UNCONDITIONALLY AND WOULD STOP THE WORLD FOR HIM TO CATCH UP

    ALONE

    HE DIDNT CARE ABOUT WHAT WAS STANDING IN FRONT OF HIM IT DIDNT BOTHER HIM

    NOW HER SOUL HURTS EVENTOHUGH SHE IS GONE BECAUSE HER LOVE NEVER ONCE FADED AWAY

    THE LOVE SHE HAD FOR HIM

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    Gman9259 commented on DREAM$

    05-12-2009

    Hi, I encourage you to keep working on your poem. There is a lot there that strikes a common thread with many young girls, and loss of their first loves. Don't be discouraged by the ratings, we all need goals to shoot for. If you were perfect there would be no room for improvement.

    Shadow2u commented on DREAM$

    02-11-2009

    Love is a journey, not a place; this we learn from experience, both the good and the bad. This is a good outpouring of feeling, but would be better as shorter phrases/words that capture the images and emotions rather than the longer sentences.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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