My $iLENt PRAyER

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    My $iLENt PRAyER

    i SAy A SiLENt PRAyER

    i CRy A PAiNFUL CRy

    i SHED My iNViSiBLE tEARS

    AS My HEAD HANGS LOW

    iT kAN NO LONGER StAy UP

    i LAy ON tHE FLAMiN' FLOORS OF HELL

    iN A POOL OF DEAD DREAMS, tHOUGHtS, ANd HOPES

    WiTHOUt ANy iDEAS OF REPAiR

    BUt GiViNG iNtO DEStRUCtiON

    NO LONGER HEARiNG tHE VOiCES OF My LOVED ONES

    BUt HEARiNG tHE CRiES OF tHOSE CONDEMED tO HELL fOR ALL EtERNity

    SEEkiNG GUiDANCE tHAt NO LONGER EXiStS

    WANtiNG HELP tHAt WiLL NO LONGER BE GiVEN tO ME

    PRAyiNG FOR A SiGN,

    PRAyiNG FOR HOPE,

    PRAyiNG FOR REDEMPtiON

    i CRy OUt tO NO LONGER bE iNViSiBLE

    tO NO LONGER CRy My PAiNFUL CRy

    BUt i WAS CONDEMED tO LAy iN tHiS POOL OF DEAD DREAMS, tHOUGHtS, AND HOPES

    My WALk UPON tHiS EARtH iS OVER

    NOW itS My tiME tO GO

    My tiME tO BE LOCkED BEHiND tHE GAtES OF HELL

    WitH NO ONE tO DELiVER ME FROM EViL

    WitH NO ONE tO SAVE My SOUL

    WItH NO ONE tO SAVE tHE LittLE Bit OF ME tHAt iS StiLL LiViNG AND BREAtHiNG

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    angelwriter commented on My $iLENt PRAyER

    05-25-2009

    the intense emotion is there!keep it up friend! At your age your excellent poet! create more master pieces......

    Shadow2u commented on My $iLENt PRAyER

    02-11-2009

    This is simplistic and raw, but powerful. An intense poem that takes me emotionally to another place; very effective.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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