EARTHS BREATH

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EARTHS BREATH

EARTHS BREATH

 

The breath of earth,
soft winds move
the butterfly chimes
that have hung for
so long
they have become
a part of me.

A dense fog slithers
down the mountain side
after a light rain
and consumes
the skeletons of
once breathing trees;
some standing,
others still struggling
to return to clay.

Flowing fog over
thin-laced leaves.
Carcasses
of a vanquished foe
where only the veins show.

Thinning fog
across the
valley floor.
The sun-drying rays
holding it at bay.
The breath of earth returning this way;

For the music of the chime
now just a soft whisper
against my cheek.

I watched as a single leaf
fluttered against my
door step
and a dark shadow from
a murder of crows passed
overhead
seemingly calling,
calling
your name .

But that was a life time ago
when the trees were young,
the leaves whole,
and the fog cast a
ring around the moon .

That’s when the
breath of earth moved
the chimes just so.
And love was new.

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devaamido commented on EARTHS BREATH

02-06-2010

This piece is beautifully descriptive of introspective lament, transitioned in the 6th stanza with the amazingly multilevel metaphor: "...a murder of crows passed overhead, seemingly calling, calling your name." and clarified by the last 2 stanzas. Excellent work!

79VETTE

02/28/2010

Thank you i,m so late in getting back to folks, my computer has been sick almost died. I,m humbled Dave

tierra7 commented on EARTHS BREATH

02-06-2010

absolutely amazin'...very provokin'...love can definently make one float to new dimensions...you have painted a delightful picture for us...enjoyed it start to finish...look forward to readin' more...welcome to OP...Namaste...Tierra @}-'-,- (10+ )

79VETTE

02/28/2010

Thank you so much. Dave

Teardrops commented on EARTHS BREATH

01-27-2010

you amase me with every poem truly a wonderful poem thanks for the read

79VETTE

02/28/2010

You know sometimes even a blind squirrel find a nut. LOL thank you . Dave

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

79VETTE’s Poems (41)

Title Comments
Title Comments
UNOPENED BOOKS 2
THE EDGE 0
LOVE 1
SILENCE OF SNOW 0
MEMORIES OF A BLUE BUNGALOW 0
A TENEMENT ON JONES STREET 1
RED SKY’S IN THE MORNING 3
BLACK KNIGHT 1
SAINT ELMO’S FIRE 3
SUNDAY MORNING GUILT ENOUGH TO GO AROUND 1
NO MATTER AT $4.95 1
THE BOX 1
THE WHEEL TURNS 1
UP THE BLUE STAIRS 1
THE KISS 1
A QUESTION OF SLEEP 1
EARLY MORNING COFFEE 1
Crimson Leaf 1
A QUESTION OF YESTERDAY 4
3 A. M. 2
LOUIS 4
THE RIVER 6
FOUR POEM ABOUT DIFFERENT THINGS 1
COACH 10 SEAT 12 2
In The Name of the Father 2
ECHOES OF DARKNESS AND LIGHT 1
MYSTIC DREAM 1
EARTHS BREATH 3
THE FERRYMAN 3
Winter Tide 3
SCARLET RIBBON 3
THE CROW 5
THE HOUSE & AUNT MILDRED 5
WINTER OF 33 2
Rain in a Tin Cup 4
PARRISH:CONFE
SSIONS OF AN ALCOHOLIC
2
Crystal of Time 0
Invisible People 1
HOW I LONG 1
THE BOXWOOD TREE 2
THE EMPTY ROOM 3