Edge of Promises

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  • Love

    Edge of Promises



    Suddenly walking out the door without giving a reason
    Time to move on; blindsided by this final love's treason.

    You said we would be the best and time will give witness to your pledge
    A life together without the hurts; who would have known the razor's edge.

    I'm getting on with life but need to check the bottom of my shoe
    Because garbage man ... I fell in love and I stepped in it too!

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    kdarcy commented on Edge of Promises

    10-23-2010

    A great title to an all to familiar event that happens all too often, to many good people ... been there - done that. Be well k
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    SallyLoBurgio

    10/23/2010

    Hi K -- Thank you for reading my poem. Respect your opinions. Thanks. Sally

    SallyLoBurgio commented on Edge of Promises

    10-12-2010

    Thank you for allowing me to share this. After reading your poems, I respect your comments. Thanks again.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Edge of Promises

    10-12-2010

    You captured how it feels to have promises of love and fidelity broken. Great write........E
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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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