english version of father

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    english version of father

    deep dark decieveing confusing love? care? lies thoughts, dreams parent? worker? what is a father to put it simply somebody who is naturally to be for you not to lie, cheat, steal, blackmail. to have love not because it a duty why dad ? not to act to care just because i have to be there you wouldnt their for me why should be their now for you my answer because your still my father and i cant have another one scared i need someone to pull from reality to tel good things why we like a ray of hope in our life so far your it

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    cmlestrade commented on english version of father

    08-10-2009

    Very hard to understand. Maybe something was lost in the translation it was a little hard to get past the grammar. The theme seemed to be the perpetual question of the why for which there is no answer.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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