Enlightend

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    And so life moves forward and more is learned and soooooooo.I will move also!!

    Enlightend

     She sits on a bench looking serene to all who pass
    Pondering the course of her decisions
    He took what was given with deep care
    He didnt care enough in return
    The heart so delicate torn
    Wondering the why of it all
    She sits in sadness total
    Her thoughts in what is ,what is
    Taking a breathe deep to exhale acceptance
    Knowing she must move forward
    Find what is desired met
    For only in a true one will all be given
    She accepts was it and continues to seek what will be
    Not regreting any for friend is friend
    What is,What is
    She is now enlightend
    Looking within,true one side hers alone
    He did not match the same
    Desire for companion sweet felt deep
    Breathing in what is,exhaling deserving of all
    She is enriched decisions made of true and real choice
    Smiling a soft tender look crosses
    Dwell she will no longer
    Moving ever forward
    She is enlightend
    Iamadreamr copywrite 11/09/09 K.D.G.

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    TinaD commented on Enlightend

    12-27-2010

    To move on after the heart is torn is one of the great journeys of the hero/heroine. Bravo.
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    dahlusion commented on Enlightend

    11-15-2009

    This is beautifully rich in "inner enlightenment" with the power to move forward in the wake of an emotional disaster. Lovely expression of your poetic mastery.
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    Iamadreamr

    11/15/2009

    As we learn and accept we must move forward.Thank you my work is sincere and heartfelt.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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