Everyone's Crying

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  • Sadness

    Everyone's Crying
    Bomb flying.
    Heads are rising.
    People dieing.
    Everyone's crying.
    Guns are firing
    Kids are hiding
    Love ones are fighting
    Still everyone's crying
    Smoke arising
    Building are falling
    And those kids still hiding
    While everyone is crying
    People are shouting
    Animals are pouting
    and those bombs still flying
    Still everyone's crying


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    hdmac commented on Everyone's Crying

    09-12-2009

    A little too repetitive. Lacks the deepness that I like in poetry.
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