Exhale ©

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    Exhale ©

    She walks into the room
    A jolt shoots up my spine
    Followed by an involuntary gasp
    My muscles tighten
    Then I blink
    For my eyes cannot fathom such beauty
    She takes another step towards me
    And as if she radiates some unknown force
    The feelings intensify
    Those blue eyes begin to look up
    As millions of thoughts run through my head at the speed of light
    Her eyes stop on me
    My muscles now totally locked
    Then our eyes meet
    This has to be the point were my life flashes before my eyes
    Because my heart is seconds from exploding
    The eyes of the angel unlock as she makes her way to her seat
    I regain control over my body
    And I remember to exhale.

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    peacefully commented on Exhale ©

    04-09-2009

    very discriptive

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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