gogant commented on Facless in the crowd

12-04-2010

A very good way of showing how some of the best of us go un-noticed....................Nice poem.................................gogant

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blackfootlady commented on Facless in the crowd

06-03-2009

I think this one is very nice.I really like it because alot of times people have the hardest time noticing others.Good work very creative and good topic!

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origionalmerlin commented on Facless in the crowd

03-20-2009

last two verses could be tightened up at least the last one listen to three people reading it cold to you and see what i mean the elements are well chosen but the transition is a bit craggy

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Domib7 commented on Facless in the crowd

03-18-2009

its good. many ppl in the world today are feel this way. faceless, no one see u, no one cares. keep it up

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PurpleWind commented on Facless in the crowd

03-18-2009

I love the idea, i know how you feel. its a good poem last stanza i think needs a dash: all i see is-, i think that would give a more obvious pause.

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