Fade Away

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    Fade Away

    I would miss you, you know it's true
    Your friends, and family, and others would too!
    We know your on the brink of death.
    So don't came near your last breath.

    At the end of a long day.
    You close your eyes as you say.
    "See you in heaven."
    And you fade away.

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    TheBean commented on Fade Away

    05-01-2010

    I love it!!! This is amazing!!! Why didn't you tell us you could write like that, Carati!!!!
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    alicecullen

    05/10/2010

    Lol thanks Bean!!!!!!!!!

    alicecullen

    06/07/2010

    i added more poems

    Lizziewriter27 commented on Fade Away

    02-17-2010

    This is really good. I didn't know you could write like that...really its amazing. Your message speaks right through your words
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    alicecullen

    05/10/2010

    Thanks!!!!!!!

    alicecullen

    06/07/2010

    i added more poems

    blindmaster commented on Fade Away

    07-30-2009

    The brink of death is a very special and honorable place but heaven itself is where we all want to be regardless of our position in life or the afterlife
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    alicecullen

    05/10/2010

    i agree

    Mrpoetry commented on Fade Away

    07-27-2009

    great poem young lady keep writing .........................................
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    alicecullen

    05/10/2010

    Thank you!!!!! :)

    alicecullen

    06/07/2010

    and i did keep writing i posted about 4 more poems

    mpjtforever commented on Fade Away

    07-27-2009

    fantastic writing, you need to post more poems, I have some poems like this one is entitled losing you . I lost my fiancee a week before our wedding to cancer, and my son of 17 years of age due to a car accident so i know all to well about death and loss of love ones, keep up the writing you have a gift,. your friend jodi
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    alicecullen

    06/07/2010

    i took your advice and posted about 4 more poems!!!...and im sorry about your fiamcee and son

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