Fair Love's Trial

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Fair Love's Trial

Thy weave, of comfort.

Thy hollow body caressing, my very being.

Turning splendid waves of rhythmic paradise

among my lunar crescent shaft.

Wean of Mother induced nurture,

temptation O' so sweet.

Perfume gathered dew of bodily fluids,

drift among sensitive sand into sea.

O' so beckoning,

O' so yearning.

Felted satin of dye,

mixing its rain of color upon my face.

Drowning layers of aqua marine gather amidst

the prism of understanding.

Lifted incense of fog divide

the realm of reality and spirituality.

O' Fair love's trial,

of one's true love denial.

O' The beckoning,

Of blissful Awakening.

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Marsink commented on Fair Love's Trial

01-22-2010

The style in word, phrasing, imagery and structure is so very different from the other I read. This was poetry, not for its' sake, but by design and dliberate, choice imagery. Excellent!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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