Family

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    Family

    family, what does it feel like to have a family,
    I never had a family,
    I had a mom, and a dad,
    but on my block everything went bad,
    I wish I had, known, known, what it feels like to have a family,
    what love has to do with it, they say,
    some say it brings happiness in every kind of way,
    others say it is shown in such a maliciously way,
    so tell me what it feels like to have a family,
    does having a family, make you strong,
    does always having a family, make you get along,
    does having a family gives you a place to always call home,
    does having a family give you some kind of security, when you feel insecure,
    what does it feel like to have a family!
    I seen families, mom, dad, sister , brother,
    some was happy, but some was crappy,
    some had a life, some lost their life,
    what is your meaning of a family,
    what does it feels like to have a family,
    or is it just the word

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    Happycamper commented on Family

    06-10-2013

    I like the subject of your poem and your search for meaning of the word family. I hope you are able to experience what it is like to be a part of a strong, happy family of your own. The poem needs some work on it to make your message more coherent and to clean up some things.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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