fathers day......connected to summer solstice

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    fathers day......connected to summer solstice

    Sunday morning.......
             fathers day.........dirt under my nails....
    more fruit and flowers bloom.............
                 3 phone calls.........3 sons
                                  shane.....jeff........jeremy sky.............
    it is...........the longest day!.......................solstice............
                                         celebrate the sun/son................ 
    she can't be me..........
                        she wants to sew her shadow to the soles of my peter pan feet...............
                             she can't be me................
    these are 2 thoughts..........2 poems

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    DLSmith commented on fathers day......connected to summer solstice

    06-22-2009

    I don't know a whole lot about form and all that, and I honestly didn't know where I was going when I started reading this, but I like where it went. I love how the words intertwined, I can't say it any other way.....Great work on these two pieces of art:)

    warmakeswar

    06/23/2009

    hey, thanks!!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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