Feelings of Nature

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    Feelings of Nature




    The restless leaves, crumbling beneath every step

    A twig snapped, the presence of life shown

    Wild and free, not a single heartbeat kept

    With so many things, still which not known



    Every breath taken, swept away with the wind

    Curiosity, freedom, adventure, not a soul in sight

    Calm and quiet, a feeling of joy does it ever so send

    The heart, the soul, as if a floating feather, light



    The beat of water, as it rushes and flows

    The treetops, through which silently whispers the wind

    The feeling of security, is all that one knows

    All the nature, to which, God may tend





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    gunshow commented on Feelings of Nature

    08-10-2009

    Very nice I like the first paragraph second line "presence of life shown" its kinda cool to think about. very nice I will be checking often to see following works.

    gunshow

    08/10/2009

    Sorry one more thing please dont be offended that I didnt rate your art I dont think that art should be rated by others. I hope you understand.

    zakito commented on Feelings of Nature

    02-09-2009

    security ? no just a flow :) z :)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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