Feelings

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    I wrote this for a friend that has a new man after the last one dogged her out ...

    Feelings

    What is this feeling I haven't fealt?
    Thought after the last time I would never have dealt,
    With another man, I was hurt, mind long gone.
    You came along & scooped me away from harm.
    A new smile & cuddly hug.
    Damn need a vaccine for this " Love Bug "
    I won't never compare you or place you in the past.
    This new friendship I intend for it to last.
    I have faith & will give you trust.
    Allowing Love to bloom instead of lust.
    This thing we have won't call it love.
    But I feel close to you- tight like a leather glove.
    Glad your my friend , Maybe one day my man.
    Ask me if I'm happy ....
    Yes I am !!!

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    spbsdude commented on Feelings

    09-17-2009

    Some friendships do turn into true love. Well portrayed here.
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    LAdyAce

    09/22/2009

    Thank You very much .. For takin the time to read my poems..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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