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    Seriously ...Do I come across foolishly?
    You have the nerve to come to me
    With this wack ass apology
    After u let her disrespect me
    Once upon a time u see
    I would have taken you back open heartedly
    Now theres no trust here with me
    Don't believe a word you breathe...




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    spbsdude commented on none

    07-16-2009

    So much said in so few words, but also so little said. I want to know more. Trust is so important, and when it is not in a relationship that is sad. It's time to move on. No point wasting time with someone you can't trust. Still I would like to know more who she is and who it is you can not trust. Feel free to check my poetry out, as I will be reading more of yours.
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    BLASTHEME commented on none

    06-08-2009

    Ok ladyace, u had me going, waiting for the next verse, waiting to see what was next as the tension was mounting to something that I expected to be a surprise ending & oh bwoy was I surprised...lol....unfinished? Uhhhhhh......lol...smile So how much longer because I was feeelin this. I will be peepin some of your other work. Please feel free to come thru n peep some of my work too. Peace BLAS
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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