Final Cut

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  • Dark Poetry

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    I guess this is just my way of finding beauty in unexpected places.

    Final Cut

     Shining, like a star in the darkness,
    Smooth as silk across the palest of skin.
    The fine edge of pain defying dulled senses.
    The body's punishment for emotion's sin.

    Crimson beauty sprawled over white.
    Satisfying, she is, as no other could be,
    A paradox of painful pleasure divine.
    The trusted constant, flowing ever slowly.

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    dahlusion commented on Final Cut

    01-25-2013

    "A paradox of painful pleasure divine"—perfect! —smiles))
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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