Fly, Fly Back Home

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  • minigirl695
  • is having dilemma that no one can even think of.

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This is another poem I wrote when I was in in Indiana.....yea...you can tell that I hated it over there =(

Fly, Fly Back Home

I search and search,
For a way back home.
But everywhere I turn,
I stand alone.

I see the snow fall,
And the sky gray.
The sun used to shine everywhere I go,
It was never this way.

As days go by,
And the nights roam,
I dream to fly,
to fly away home.

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keithrberryjr commented on Fly, Fly Back Home

08-06-2009

Great poem and expression of such strong emotions and longing for home

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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