for the children

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    • freind
    • sitting here reading all you nice peoples poems.

    for the children

    we got this gift.
    it surely was from god?
    some may not have recevied it.
    but the world loves you too.
    you help us make it right.
    for the things you do.
    the abuse.
    the negelect.
    the abduction.
    that what people like you .
    who do this.
    are not like the rest.
    children are innocent.
    you have to love them so.
    i only say this to you.
    you were also a gift from god.
    i plead to you.
    stop what you do.
    because god is watching you.

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    Teardrops commented on for the children

    01-07-2010

    nice flow good read and i get my verbs mixed up all the time you still got your point across

    Tempy commented on for the children

    10-18-2009

    I enjoyed your poem. it was a great read and great write. ~!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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