For the last time

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  • Mikek77
  • Writing "works of the mind" again after so long

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This poem is just a poem that embodies the feelings that hide beneath the surface of my friends supposed "happy" lifestyle. She has had many things done to her and very many things have effected her. I hope that she will get better but she had asked me to write this for her so here it is Em and I hope you like it.

For the last time

For the last time, I will speak
For the last time, you will talk to me
Even though this is true, I still find it hard
Hard to understand why, why you can do such a thing
A thing that burns the immortal soul into nothing
A thing that can destroy all that has stood the ages of time
Could such things exist if it can bring the giants of time down
For the last time, I kiss thine lips
For the last time, I withstand the flames of supposed love
Now, one question remains, a question that in itself will
Bring you down from your self-righteous pedestal

No more will these flames of love burn me
No more will I kiss these lips of a liar
No more will these lies bury themselves in my heart
I hope you will one day feel the same desperate hate and feelings of loneliness

For the last time, I will not need you
For the last time, I breathe this air of lies 

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Artie commented on For the last time

11-06-2010

This is the first piece I've read of yours, and I'm quite impressed. I'm looking forward to more - 10 from me

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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