Ridin' The Bullet

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  • Dark Poetry
    • Mikek77
    • Writing "works of the mind" again after so long

    Ridin' The Bullet
    You Think That Was Bad...
    Think Again
    Because Your Ridin' The Bullet
    The Bullet Leaves You Behind
    You Just Missed The Chance Of A Lifetime
    What Made You Think Death Was Easy?
    Well Guess What, It AINT
    Why Didn't You Make The Hit?
    Because Of Your Conscience, Your Dead
    The Hit Got You
    That Light You See Aint You Going To Heaven
    Its The Metro Comin' At You
    All Because Your Ridin' The Bullet

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    Artie commented on Ridin' The Bullet

    11-06-2010

    I like this. At first the image of an actual bullet was in my mind, then you mention the metro and really changes things. There is much depth in your writing, and you show it well. 10 from me
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    Mikek77 commented on Ridin' The Bullet

    11-04-2010

    XD haha Chaos it wasnt meant to be a halfway gangster-ish but It works i guess
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    Chaos128 commented on Ridin' The Bullet

    06-13-2010

    Ouch! No crybabies need to bother coming around this piece ha ha. A hard message, Mikek77… it never does pay to be a halfway gangster.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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