FOREVER YOURS

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FOREVER YOURS


Something just doesn't
make any sence to me..

is it ur personality???
is it just the way u r???


the way u say things to me..
it makes me relise..

me and u r the only people
that make sence to eachother

no one understands
u and me

so no mater what im forever yours :D

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Chaos128 commented on FOREVER YOURS

11-09-2010

Did you sign anything? Forever's a long time ha ha Never mind me, AlBaNi98, I'm just jealous because I have all the warmth and compassionof a gila monster. Very affecting verse. I do gotta agree with ShadowStealer, though. The spelling does smudge the shine a bit.

ShadowStealer commented on FOREVER YOURS

10-12-2010

The spelling could have been a little better, but nonetheless a very poetic write. Wonderful! ShadowStealer

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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