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cali

10-06-2009 at 11:54:17 PM

cali

plz read my poem and tell me what u think...

10-10-2009 at 03:16:11 AM

Re: cali

Hey Cal! I commented on Curtains Close. But I commented on its subject matter, not its construction. Just let me know, and I'll critique it a bit for you.


Light,
Stirred Draught
gulp followed immediately with gulp





Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.