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cali

10-06-2009 at 11:54:17 PM

cali

plz read my poem and tell me what u think...

10-10-2009 at 03:16:11 AM

Re: cali

Hey Cal! I commented on Curtains Close. But I commented on its subject matter, not its construction. Just let me know, and I'll critique it a bit for you.


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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA