Where have all the gentle poems gone....???
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote: Originally Posted by Rhymer This is why I hate forums and usually do not post very often in them. I have done more here, by request, than anywhere else. I really do not care what Gogant wants to read or doesn't want to read. A voice crying in the wilderness. I do appreciate cousinsoren, trying to interject reason and trying to be the peace maker. This will be my last forum post, not out of spite or anger, but simply not what I like to do. I like to write poetry, and stories and when I'm not writing I'm usually working a sixty hour week. My time is limited and I would rather read good poetry than listen to others that feel they have a moral obligation to force everyone to view the world through rose colored glasses. Drive by post, moving on. %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% My Friend, A sixty hour a week work schedule is quite a heavy load. In Jamaica , a forty -hour per week is the norm. Not many companies offer over-time work with extra pay-hours.,and never in government services. I recognize that you dislike forums, However , I sincerely hope that you will continue to share your poetry with your Friends, and others, on the OP. site. Jobs are becoming scarce, in USA,. My brother in California was out of work for many months MY brother-in-law,in Miami, is jobless even now, after several months. The condition is no better in Jamaica. I hope that your job is permanent, and that you are enjoying it. My regards. LOVE, PEACE and CONTINUING ENLIGHTENMENT. Last edited by cousinsoren 10-27-2010 at 04:09:08 PM |
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote: Originally Posted by dahlusion Originally Posted by gogant It seems to me that it is getting harder to find any more good, loving, gentle poems, to read. It seems as if everyone wants to write about funerals, the devil, suicide, real murders, rape, wife beating, gory bloodletting, ungodly things, and sad cases of schizophrenia. I know that most will say, "If you don't like 'em, don't read 'em." The only problem with that declaration is, I have to at least begin to read something before I realize that it is another dismal real-life, gory, blasphemous piece. Oh, there are a lot of poets here who still give us some wonderful pieces to enjoy, but, woe, there are some who seem to be leaning toward the occult...............If any of my friends notice that I haven't commented on their work lately....well, it is probably because I am displeased with what they have been penning..... I just wanted to get that off my chest......... Thank you for listening............................................................gogant G, If you want to live in a bubble, then you have to buy a bubble blowing pipe. Life is everything the poets on OP write about, it may not be your life but it's certainly is theirs and theirs to write about, and we must honor their feelings, emotions, and words. It's a good thing that we have you and your poetry to keep us lighthearted. dah  ************************************************************************************************************ Dah, . Your reply to the complaint of a few of us, including myself, is very reasonable. THANKS |
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote: Originally Posted by dahlusion I have a new dark poem: "Laughing At God's Sick Jokes" come and read, and wander through its dark halls dark dah %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% I have read it. Much food for metaphysical contemplation, strikingly composed. This poem remiinds me of an awesome thunderstorm, I experienced three weeks ago. Last edited by cousinsoren 10-27-2010 at 03:09:07 PM |
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote: Originally Posted by papapaczki Originally Posted by gogant It seems to me that it is getting harder to find any more good, loving, gentle poems, to read. It seems as if everyone wants to write about funerals, the devil, suicide, real murders, LOL I think its Halloween and the Poets of Blood movement that's spawned the elevated Dark Poetry submissions. I usually try and toss 2-3 poems per day up on Twitter, but I've been reluctant to put some of the dark poems up. Some are ok, but some might scare some people lol -Papa Paczki &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& A few folks, primarily Americans,. celebrate Halloween , over the years ,in Jamaica. It has never taken on among Jamaicans,although we adopt many American lifestyle and culture in the island. Our kids and adults prefer to dress in costumes for the annual Carnival, which is an awesome event.. Papa, Let us not be weary in well doing. Let the Dark Poets and their fans have fun . It's the season of Halloween. Last edited by cousinsoren 11-02-2010 at 02:01:59 AM |
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???
Last edited by gogant 10-27-2010 at 04:47:23 PM |
|
RE: Clayton Hellbonz the Zombie ComedianQuote: Originally Posted by WordSlinger Clayton Hellbonz the Zombie Comedian 
Ladies and Gentleman. The fire alarm doesn’t work, and all doors are locked. A shield is on blocking all cell phones. You demanded. OP supplies OP is proud to present tonight. And for your Halloween weekend. Clayton Hellbonz the Zombie Comedian… Heaven-0 you all look good, So how is your life? You all look proud.. My whole life was a dead end. But now I am up on this stage Can you guess my age? I have no girl friends Because none of them wanted to dig me up I’ am romantic, and play music by ear, My last girl, freaked out with fear because I left my head in the piano And then I dumped her, And wiped my butt, oh You should’ve seen her face I never won an award, or a contest just a Deadication I was almost killed before I died, doesn’t count right? I was hit by a truck, and I filed a law suit: I cried I lost because I had no leg to stand on At the hospital I learned a few sick jokes But I won’t tell you them because they’re to long I learned all these jokes from your children Let me tell you about heaven, hell sucks Every one is burnt, I hate burnt brains Heaven is to be filled to the nasal cavities with all of God’s best-tasting creatures and be wheeled out after midnight satisfied in my digestive triumph The majestic feast of artery clogging Brains brings a greasy smile to my face Then I want to sit and drink Pabst Blue Ribbon beer And Reminisce, about my previous diet of dear Seattle has fine restaurants, all kinds of walks of life So many homeless there, looks like a street buffet Ok my last joke; is it a BBQ, our a cook out? You all figure it out, because it doesn’t matter to me I’ am just starving Thank you for the good night….. I’ll tip the waitresses……. And the lights go out……  &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& Bravo, WordSlinger, Your satirical ribaldry , in well written vibrant poetry, ( Clownish when you want to play the clown with a purpose) never fails to offer a bellyful of rib-cracking, riotous, rollicking fun and laughter. On with it, GUY! We need humorous poems badly, like how a dog badly needs to get rid of fleas,...LOL>, There is not enough laughter being generated on this site. I intend to install a Poetic Humour Forum on the OP site in 2011, with poems, limericks, local and original jokes, humorous jokes, poetic anecdotes. riddle, proverbs, poetic chit-chats. amusing cooking recipes, etc, etc, You don't have to apply, You are invited to be the chief raconteur and chief toastmaster, master chef, waiter, errand boy , host and bottlewasher. Last edited by cousinsoren 10-28-2010 at 02:02:38 PM |
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote: Originally Posted by cousinsoren Gogant has made it very clear. No offence is meant. We are sincerely asking for more of a gentle type of poetry, as there is a serious absence of such poetry on the OP site. We are ,in no way, objecting to other types of poetry. Those who are asking for more of the gentle type of poetry, have no right to object to other types, and we are fully conscious of that. We wish not to be misunderstood nor taken out of context. There is not "a serious absence" of gentle poetry on OP. My feeling is that you are hanging out with the "wrong friends" as in, time to make new friends, or support the friends you have through their trying times. |
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???I don't get it Dah......what's the point ? The game ended in a tie, so let the |
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote: Originally Posted by gogant I don't get it Dah......what's the point ? The game ended in a tie, so let the players go home.... "Must be the season of the witch" —boo !
|
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Rhyming for Dummies |
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???I fully understand what Gogant is saying first and foremost I'm not gonna rip or shred or demean and this will play a little into what Dah has said as well about making new friends instead of bickering and debating point of view which common sense tells us is pointless when poets with "gentle poems" see this thread leave a link for Gogant and cousin and whoever else wants to peruse and like I said this will play into what Dah has said because this to me would be a good way of how new friends are made. So I leave on this well done human race well done for even with the simplest of subjects ego and self could not be overcome to find a logical solution. |
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote:
Originally Posted by ginga Rhyming for Dummies (hooked on a name game, a knee jerk reaction) BLOUSE and SKIRT, PANTS and SHIRTS! Inside this shack Mable and Jack Outside this room The Bride and Groom Under the bridge Derek and Midge At the shore Jason saw Lenore Over at school Donald told Jewel Sitting on a bench Cora and Mench On the stoop Mary grins at Snoop In the backyard Lisa kissed Minard Two miles away Johnny fights with Kay Behind the stores Eddie fires Delores Sitting in traffic Judy swears at Maverick On the side of the road Joanie trips Joad While lying on their backs Wanda tickles Mack Up in the tree Martin steadies Lee Crossing a creek Tammy saves Ezeke While driving home Mikey waves to Simone Down at the fair Meryle waits for Clare In the middle of the game Shelley roots for Graham At the BBQ Winston cooks for Sue While getting a tan Morey rubs lotion on Fran While packing her bags Nora cries over Craig While casting his line Ricky sings to Tyne Inside the Corvette Jim makes love to Yvette Out in the storm Sallie looks for Loram In the middle of the night Missy rolls onto Dwight When the rooster crows Frankie yells to Rose After the prom Lilly yearns for Dom Out in the country air Jordan smiles at Jer While watching grass grow Linda paints her toe….. Gogant and company carry on with this nonsense for me please and cousinoren you can see I have started something for that thread you mention!    [/quo&[b]&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& BLOUSE and SKIRT, PANTS and SHIRT! UNDER THE BRIDGE ! BRAVO, Ginga! You are a bit previous, as the Humour Thread (Forum??)gets on track early 2011 and not late 2010. (It's now too near to Christmas,and I am writing a poem to Santa Claus). Hem your shortest skirt three ( 3 ) inches shorter, though it is now Autumn , and leaves and hemlines are falling, and sit on the throne as "Queen of Humour". You have earned the crown and sceptre, with your first strike on the yet unborn .Humour Thread. Post a picture of you sitting on the throne in your abbreviated skirt, "unexposed" , "exposed" or is it "unopposed?" I am sleepy, confused and delightfully infused ( enthused??) to dream your poem, all night, tonight, . l am still laughing , though I am getting sleepier. Last edited by cousinsoren 10-29-2010 at 09:45:32 PM |
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???LOL!! I guess I can wait a couple months to make a bigger fool out of myself. |
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Those of us that attempt to write entertaining (gentle poetry) are somewhat taken aback by the inference of the question raised by the title of this thread... as if the gentle poems are not being posted..............................Hampton |
|
Where have all the gentle poems gone....???No Hamp, that is not what I meant. The other day I was going through Quote:
Originally Posted by Hampton Those of us that attempt to write entertaining (gentle poetry) are somewhat taken aback by the inference of the question raised by the title of this thread... as if the gentle poems are not being posted..............................Hampton |
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Thanks. I accept your explanation and withdraw |
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Well, I thank you kindly, Sir Hampton, for accepting my explanation.... Quote:
|
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote: Originally Posted by gogant Seems to me that some folks didn‘t read my little story of my seventh grade science episode. "George is the only one who put the right answer down." My answer was simply, "I don't have any idea of what is in the bag." Dano, Stefy, and others, who have gone off on an intangible tangent -- I will try to quiet your jangled nerves. Look, and this time read, what I said. I did not say anything about disallowing poetry of any kind…….I made an observation that I thought was quite clear in meaning. I don’t have to defend my outlook on what I feel about certain kinds of poetry -- Write all the dark stuff you wish to write…..curse me, if that makes you happy, call me everything you can think of, except late for supper……………………………….gogant ~ ~ ~ Dano Posted: forum posts like this is what makes people feel uncomfortable on op... we are all suppose to support each other here as fellow poets and not chastised for the subject in which we write... makes me wonder if i will hesitate the next time i have something to post or perhaps not post a new piece because of the negativity it might receive... everyone is suppose to feel welcome and comfortable here and right now i don’t ~ ~ ~ Stefy Posted: do you know why i write dark poetry i justify myself in my last poem -Tell me - what did i do... talk about Dano`s poem '' what did i do''... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Yeah. I read it,and thought I'd cracked a rib or two laughing. I planned sending you a doctor's bill. But I am now ok to laugh less uproariously, in order not to further jeopardize my ribs. Be happy that you don't owe anybody anything, but to pay them some more riotous laughter. Last edited by cousinsoren 10-30-2010 at 10:50:48 AM |
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Well Cousin, it wasn't meant to be funny, just to make a point. |
|
RE: RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote: Originally Posted by cousinsoren Papa, Let us not be weary in well doing. Let the Dark Poets and their fans have fun . It's the season of Halloweeen. [/b] I never discriminate against any of the genres. I thought it was nice that everyone was celebrating the season. Thanksgiving in the United States is coming up in 3 weeks. I expect those types of poems will now be elevated. |
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???with out the dark |
|
RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???I think you're all nuts. |
|
RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....??? Quote:I THINK YOU ARE ALL NUTS! ////////////////////////////LOL &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& May your conclusion,(a wisdom and humorous , gratifying comment ) bear fruit in the OP vineyard, I pray. GOSPEL TRUTH! Straight off the shoulder from Hyportlacking's pulpit! THANKS from one of your nutty converts. The problem is , ""I am not one of the nuts" a self- righteous admission, Tha's a compliment of which your video disciple is not worthy,. He has to work more saintly to gain this ethereal title. I am just a silly, sometimes wise and humble poet, piously , wholly me.............................LOL __________________________________________________________________ PLease read my Christmas poem,"Letter To Santa Claus" whenever you see it, and send me a gift comment. After all, it will be Christmas. Did you enjoy Halloween? Last edited by cousinsoren 11-01-2010 at 05:44:28 PM |
|
RE: RE: RE: Where have all the gentle poems gone....???Quote: Originally Posted by cousinsoren &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& Your conclusion, wisdom and humorous , gratifying comment is accepted. GOSPEL TRUTH! Straight off the shoulder from Hyporlacking's pulpit! THANKS from one of your nutty converts. The problem is , ""I am not one of the nuts' Tha's a compliment of which Your video disciple is not worthy,. He has ro work more saintly to gain this ethereal title. I am just a silly, sometimes wise m humble poet, pously , wholly me.............................LOL Haha 
|
|
Where have all the gentle poems gone....GONE TO GRAVEYARDS EVERYONE???JadedJezzabel Posted: Last edited by gogant 11-01-2010 at 05:23:51 PM |
If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.
Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.