UPA Forum Challenge

This poem is for any pooets that wish to join it will be on Traffic Thats the subject for this week good luck and wish you all the best. remember place title hear and please post at the bottom of the Poem it was UPA challenge thanks Robert..

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UPA Forum Challenge posted

Title: "Collision"

Hope this goes well with this theme!

Bri

brand new dance

This poem is called a Brand New Dance

Let me stimulate your mind, body and your soul
And tell about a man named Jesus
who loves you, so let Him take control
He will take you from a state of has been
And wash away all your sins
Although you do exotic dance
If you accept Jesus no one can pluck you from His Hands
Because He can see deep inside
Every time you dance, it brings tears to your eyes
Your flesh is saying do your thing
But your spirit is saying listen to the Heavenly King
Because He will never lead you wrong
And He will have you dancing to a brand new song
This is coming from a friend that really cares
And to let you know that Jesus will always be there
Because He is the One who gives everlasting love
All you have to do is accept Him and look above



written by marvin crutchfield aka mrpoetry

Re: UPA Forum Challenge

great poem, however which challenge does this fall under??
Bri

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Collision

My outlasted skin smashes into the enemy,
Leaping out from the crowd I pray no damage is done
We both receive citations for our actions,
I just ask after therapy can we please become friends
After all the damage was only a collision.

Last edited by optimistic 06-16-2009 at 07:15:21 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Plot121

This poem is for any pooets that wish to join it will be on Traffic Thats the subject for this week good luck and wish you all the best. remember place title hear and please post at the bottom of the Poem it was UPA challenge thanks Robert..

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ok for the forum challenge Each Day's Test tell me all what you think take care Robert...

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Hi,
I have a problem... a poet on this thread has used the same title as I have for my poem. While, I am flattered, I really believe that a sense of originality should be adhered to.

Thank you.
Brielle