Free Spirit

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    • Biz
    • "I have a garden of my own, Shining with flowers of every hue; I loved it dearly while alone, But I shall love it more with you..." Thomas Moore

    Free Spirit

     ~Free Spirit, New Soul.
      ~so he calls himself.
    ~Agreeing with one, confused of the other.
    ~The Destroyer keeps at it; my own doings.
    ~Too bad I can't blame another.
    ~The finger is at me- I have no excuse.
    ~How do I fix this? He will go away. I crossed the line.
    ~There is no forever.
    ~Forever is definite. No questions wondered. Is there such a thing? Forever?
    ~I have lost another, a love never felt before.
    ~I was wrong, He is a free spirit.
    ~He needs to find another new soul.

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    lonewolf commented on Free Spirit

    08-03-2009

    theres always forgiveness and a chance to make amends. dont dwell on the past, but look to tomorrow. another good write
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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