FREE

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    FREE
    I wanna be free

    soar the skies
    like butterflies
    let nature get me high
    have my soul drip showers
    nourish knowledge's flowers
    bloom destiny's path
    feel the new rath
    of me

    i wanna be free

    pumping in my veins like juice
    letting my spirit get loose
    the fragrance of stress free is inhaled
    problem drama is exhaled
    stay out of misery's company
    find a way to make this money
    start a journey of living
    for my lil man and 3 women
    4 parts of me

    i wanna be free

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    GinasDiamond commented on FREE

    01-18-2011

    I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! A LOT OF US FEEL THIS WAY & U EXPRESS IT GREATLY!!!!
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    Derico commented on FREE

    09-11-2009

    Creative, such an outburst of intended liberation. There is a vision and height aspired here and the poet is do whatever it takes to be complete and her motivation is "the four parts". Well penned!
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    yizzo commented on FREE

    03-31-2009

    All i can say is wow
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    Bonofied commented on FREE

    03-24-2009

    i feel u 199 percent
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    Likkwidred1 commented on FREE

    03-17-2009

    this a very spiritual piece. put dat to some wind chimes and some women singing over your lyrics and you have a dish that will feed your mental.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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