Fresh Snow

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    Fresh Snow

    I feel for you like fresh snow that
    Falls and turns into ice.
    I melt into your embrace as the snow
    In a warm and open field.
    I shall softly trickle my flakes of love
    On top of the house that holds your heart.

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    symmetry commented on Fresh Snow

    09-18-2009

    And the snow falls, every flake in its appropriate place. Thank you for the wonderful imagery

    bustaryme commented on Fresh Snow

    05-29-2009

    Real cute. But as I read it I seem to be looking for more to come. What happens next? The metaphor can be deeper.

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