from a distance

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For Mom 2-17-38 to 3-4-09

from a distance

facing infinity
feeling very small...

a dark clear night
gazing at stars


a shooting star sizzles,
brilliant twinkle,

transforms.


earthbound,
tears well,

gravitate and flood
feeling the miss you...


i love you mom

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Gracey commented on from a distance

10-12-2009

This is so heartfelt and lovely.. :) good write :)

ZQ

10/12/2009

Thank you. :^]

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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