From a Far

2 Comments

From a Far

Metaphors of
Blue oceans
Swirling gently
Clockwise                      Mysterious, Inviting, Beautiful, Pure

Similes Of
Pale deserts
As warm as
the Sun                         Blinding, Captivating, Beautiful, Affectionate

Poetry Of
a Diamond
Glimmering from
A far

Poem Comments

(2)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

Stryx commented on From a Far

08-29-2010

A very good and unusual write. I like its originality. That's you, friend,

RiderPunch

08/29/2010

Thank you very much.

JadedJezzabel commented on From a Far

08-29-2010

you have one hell of a cool style and form here.....add to that the value of the chosen words and you have true eloquent filled with emotion poetry........bravo!

RiderPunch

08/29/2010

Thank you. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read and comment my work.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

RiderPunch’s Poems (18)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Untitled new poem 0
most likely a bad idea 0
Orange rhymes with Door-hinge 1
Life On Fire 2
Destinations 1
nimbus 1
The Moonlight, The Fool 1
Beaches in Black 1
Sir Ronald of Surfwood 0
Growing Season 0
Good Morning 0
Each and Every 3
Youth and Passion: Light up the sky 0
Youth and Passion: Arrival at the Sun. 2
Custom 0
Disappearance 3
Root 4
From a Far 2