Gap Skin
I am of egg and earth,Of shell and suck,
And I have come close.
The waste we are...
In salt or soot
I am the legs
You are the legs
Bone by bone by stone by phone
Our buoyant skeletons float out of our bodies,
Leaving us asleep
Gap Skin
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written on 8/17/10Of shell and suck,
And I have come close.
The waste we are...
In salt or soot
I am the legs
You are the legs
Bone by bone by stone by phone
Our buoyant skeletons float out of our bodies,
Leaving us asleep
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Blueroad commented on Gap Skin
09-09-2010
- It seems that there is a strong thought beyond the words you have used. Not sure, but what I could get out of your poem was that life is a road that leads to death.
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poetheart87 commented on Gap Skin
09-09-2010
- Wonderful, mystical words you weave. Not quite sure what the meaning was, but loved the sound of your words. Keep writing
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