Gone.... but still there with you

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Gone.... but still there with you

The day I die is the day I start my new life.  Sadness and sorrow flows through the air as my past life sinks into the fertile soil deeper, and deep i go the closer i get to his hand my soul reaches out so he can take me to my rightful home.  Peace, love, faith.... all these things i feel.... such joy

Tho I am gone I am still with you do not weep everyday because my life was taken away.... you cannot sence my presence around you, you cant see me nor here me....

but i am there....

Always......


- Christopher A. Elam Jr.

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cheronld commented on Gone.... but still there with you

05-13-2010

nice poem....this one is for all the believers out there...I wish I was one...

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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